99 Banana Road
Fruit Valley
0000
Dear mum and dad,
I can Hear games going on and off. The games buzzed and screamed. I can see Shimmering lights at a disco and tickets going crazy! I could smell popcorn hot-dog, pizza and jelly, and... frosty-ice-cream. I can taste dairy when I get Out of the car. I felt a fake gun, it was very solid and gold.
Where am I?
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.
Something I enjoyed was describing the place because it was with my family and friends.
I found it tricky to write down all my thoughts. Next I will put capital letters in the right places.
1 comment:
You have tried hard and used good adjectives. Remember to edit your writing more carefully next time.
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