Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my writing.

The Lonely Whale

One day whale came to play with someone. He didn’t want to be alone. But someone came to play and yes they did.

Sometimes it is easy to add detail to my story and sometimes it is a bit tricky. I don't always know what to say.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Well done at trying to add detail to your stories!