Friday, August 14, 2015

Writing Term 3


Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to

  • add some detail to my writing
  • choose words to make my writing more interesting
We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week.  First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.

"I like writing about TANIWHAS!  I am getting better at writing.  I know more words now.  I can ask Mrs Koroa to help me."
Levi

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You are starting to write some great stories Levi. Keep working hard.